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release me

i see you there…
do you notice me?
i sit at watch…
unfaltering eyes follow you
tracing your every move
do you notice me?
i fidget silently
in the corner
head down
but eyes stealthily on you
waiting…
wondering…
do you notice me?
silent Hell…
sweet torture
release me…

i want to cry
but don’t have the tears
i want to scream
but don’t have the voice
i want to reach out
but don’t have the strength
i want to beg
but pride refuses to allow me

i wait for you…
to release me
from my silent suffering

shadowz 2003
©2003-2009 ~serpentis
:iconserpentis:

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Inspiration in the midst of chaos in my life...at least there's always a glimmer at the end of the tunnel that I can turn to...

Oddly enough, this *IS NOT* what it appears to be...I know a few people might interpert this the wrong way...Those who know me and know how I am, *should* see it for what it is (or at least I'm hoping)

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:iconvespera:
This almost seems like it could go on much farther, it's got this song like quality to it =)

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Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.
:iconstealth37:
A very, very nice poem. Especially love this part :
"i want to cry
but don’t have the tears
i want to scream
but don’t have the voice
i want to reach out
but don’t have the strength
i want to beg
but pride refuses to allow me0
"

and i noticed the word "stealthily" ... hehehe this poem rocks. +fav'

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style is non-existant.
:icontaintedutopia:
Very well done...

-Shade

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*stomp stomp stomp*
:iconserpentis:
Honestly, it could go on, but I was exhausted when I wrote it and the rest of it...well...my brain lost over sleepy time :(

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I am me...nothing more, nothing less...

member of ~distortedbeauty * ~erotic-ink * ~DemonZelda * ~GothicFashion * ~bondage-obsessed * ~poseraddicts * *Apophysis * =onewordphoto
:iconserpentis:
hehehe ;) Thanks

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I am me...nothing more, nothing less...

member of ~distortedbeauty * ~erotic-ink * ~DemonZelda * ~GothicFashion * ~bondage-obsessed * ~poseraddicts * *Apophysis * =onewordphoto
:iconserpentis:
Thank You...

~k

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I am me...nothing more, nothing less...

member of ~distortedbeauty * ~erotic-ink * ~DemonZelda * ~GothicFashion * ~bondage-obsessed * ~poseraddicts * *Apophysis * =onewordphoto
:iconvespera:
perchance you could work on it more later? please tell me if you do!

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Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.
:iconserpentis:
Possibly...Will let you know :)

--
I am me...nothing more, nothing less...

member of ~distortedbeauty * ~erotic-ink * ~DemonZelda * ~GothicFashion * ~bondage-obsessed * ~poseraddicts * *Apophysis * =onewordphoto
:iconvespera:
that'd be stellar =D

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Your musky lips, cramping smoke into halos,
love to finger obscenities and slander. I am a bitch now.
Don’t touch her now, this thing of waste. She’s
Empty. She’s full of spite.

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